Shoot! 7:58 arrival??
With traffic, I’m cutting it close already.
Gotta zoom!
8:02
Ticking away
8:06
The teacher made it seem like such a big deal to be on time for this..!
8:10!
PARKED
Finally.
8:12
Phew! in the building
Of course, I really need to pee
8:15
Rush in apologizing to the instructor who says it starts at 8:30 (not 8 like I thought this morning) so I’m good 🤣
I love how you’ve formatted this post! The time stamps create suspense and pacing, and the unexpected twist at the end gave the reader (and you too!) a moment to take a breath.
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Thank you!
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Great structure that shows movement and suspense.
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Don’t you just hate rushing around to only find out you are early? Parking can really be an issue some places. Hope the class was good that day!
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